Saturday, February 16, 2008

five paragraphs summarizing what happens in the story

At the Rainbow Bar, there were smoking and drinking. In the middle of the Bar Axl and the woman were kissing but Stephanie looked it. Stephanie came to Axl and fight with the woman. Axl wanted to Stephanie clam down so he pull Stephanie out to the Rainbow Bar. Stephanie wanted to know whyAxl were still love his ex-girlfriend. She was so angry so she found Slash to forget it.

Axl knew that Stephanie was found Slash, thought Stepharie was still love Slash. So he went to the gun shop to buy gun for killing Slash. Another side, Stephanie was not want to married Axl because she know his ex-girlfriend was still love Axl and Axl was not care her anymore. Slash do not want the woman and he will prevent from the wedding so he wanted to die with the woman on the car crash. However, the car crash did not kill them.

The next day, in the church, Stephanie didn't bring the ring in the wedding because of the Axl was still love the woman. Axl was so unhappy of the ring and than one man put his ring to the Stephanie. So the wedding was still go on. They had a party after wedding and Stephanie was so sad.

In the wedding party, Axl prepared a gun to kill Slash because he thought Slash is too love Stephanie. Suddenly, it rained. Axl know that it was a good time to kill Slash but he killed Stephanie carelessly.

Stephanie is dead and Slash was in the jail because many of people thought Axl would not to kill his wife..

After this killing action, Axl tlke drugs to help him sleep every day and he thought he was done this wrongly. So he killed himself in the hill. Slash was get out to the jail and go to Axl's grave sometimes on that day after.

1 comment:

Wootang01 said...

Nice try, Arnold; I see your "too love" statement is written in Cantonese using English words; "love" is a verb, and Axl loved Stephanie too...to...

I'm glad that, for the most part, you spelled the characters' names correctly; your descriptions of the scenes, however, do not seem to match my recollection of them in November Rain and Don't Cry. What would be the climax of your story, by the way?

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