Friday, January 25, 2008
A letter plan
I'll write the story about lovelessness. Yhe letter written by Jeremy's classteacher to Jeremy's parents. It will take place on after parent's day, it will take about Jeremy did not have enough love from his parents and hope his parents can improve the relationship because Jeremy's classteacher afraid Jeremy will do something wrongly on his classmates.
Sunday, January 20, 2008
At least one example from the story
Escapism
- The ugly duckling wanted to escape when it is so upset
Example: In 19-20 paragraph
- But all the creatures in the yard made fun of the ugly duckling just the same. The ducks pushed him and the chickens teased him and the turkeys bits him. Even the girl who fed the poultry kicked him. And his very own brothers and sisters were so mean to him that he felt just terrible.
- One day, when he couldn't stand it any longer, her decided to fly away. He flew over the barnyard fence and on and on, weary and unhappy until he came to the marsh where the wild ducks lived.
It should do its best and forget its brothers when it is very angry.
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